Gold ~Vultures~

[madilinda]

BASIC INFO

Name: Gold
Age: 40 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Vultures 
Rank: Second in command
Brief Description:  yellow eyed, golden furred tabby she-cat with a white tail.

APPEARANCE & PERSONALITY

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Looks in Detail:  She has yellow eyes, golden fur (hence the name Gold) and a white tail. She often tends to have a expressionless look on her face or look that says she making an important choice. Her eyes have hardened over the years so she did have to kill a savenger only once. Secretly she sneaks off into her favorite spot and looks into tree with a worried look on her wondering if Silver is still alive. She also tends to flicks her tail a lot but that is pretty much just a habit.

Personality: She hardened over the years but she still wasn't able to watch a cat get and do nothing. When a cat had to be killed she'd pretend that she was sleeping in her den or out hunting. She might be strong but she felt a love for the kits. She is quiet, and gentle but also fierce and determined. She gets grumpy without any sleep. When someone loses there sibling she become very sympathetic to them, for she had once felt the same agonizing pain inside. She does very kind and merciful things secretly.

HISTORY & RP SAMPLE

History: kit hood: Her life was an accident. Her and her sister's lives weren't meant to happen. While wandering for a new home for Skyclan Cloudstar met a rogue named Jewel (who was a former Vulture clanner) and fell in love with her. Although they were Cloudstar's kits he knew he had to stay faithful to his real mate Birdflight so he asked Jewel to raise them. Jewel taught the two kits the ways of The Vultures and although Her sister Gold advanced at them, Silver wasn't interested.
Scavenger: Although Gold knew she had to let Silver live her destiny, for weeks after she was gone Gold was distracted and because of that she almost killed for not bringing in enough prey. Other than that, Gold was a natural scavenger. Once, when her friend Bird didnt bring enough prey, she gave Bird one of her prey, since she had plenty. They never spoke of that.
Second in command: Gold was slightly more kind than the Right pawed cat before her although the right pawed cat before her became leader. When she was pick there was massive controversy over it. Some cats said that her Skyclan roots made her too merciful to be the Right pawed cat. Gold ignored all the comments and eventually everyone got over it.

RP Sample: "I choose Gold to be the new deputy." The leader said. The entire group gasped. Gold stood up. "Thank you. I am honored." She said. The leader nodded. "She has Skyclan roots!" One cat said. "She's too merciful!" Said another. Cats shouted out there rather rude comments. Some cats cheered for her. "I knew this was going to bring an argument so I want to see how you will handle it." The leader whispered into Gold's ear. Gold nodded. This was going to be a hard battle.

OOC INFO

OOC Name: Madi, Madilinda either way.
How You Found Us: I was on the original site.
Other Characters: Silverstar and Gold
Anything Else: None

[Ghostie]

Your application has been
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In order to properly edit your application, please take into consideration the following points.

[/b], Your detailed look is not long enough. You only have 92 words. It need to be 100.

Second, Your personality is not long enough. You only have 94 words. It needs to be 100.

Thrid, Because we are still currently fixing up the Shop and Money systems, you cannot purchase being related to Cloudstar of Skyclan, as he is a Cannon Character. You may however say that you are from Skyclan.

Fourth, You cannot have Silverlight as leader and Gold in a deputy position. You must make one or the other a Warrior/Scavanger/Survivor.
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